jthrash's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ms. Notabot 123 (As Teacher)]

I hate to be that one guy who makes a critique after all this praise you're getting, but one thing you may want to watch out for in future background drawings is not having lines too close to each other (I'm sorry if I can't remember what my college professors called this). Basically, in this case, to make it more obvious that the chair bottom is closer to us than the book case in perspective, it would help if the chair bottom extends past the bookcase. It looks like the vertical line on the chair almost perfectly touches the vertical edge of the book case, and I guess it makes it look like the chair bottom is flat?

Man, I need to look up that term my professors used so I don't have to explain this in so many words. Either way, this drawing is very entertaining and great overall, I just wanted to help a little bit to make future stuff look even better!

Finasty responds:

Now i understand what you mean, the bookcase is a bit far from the chair in case of perspective, that's why you see the vertical lines almost touched perfectly

[Public U. Art Club #8]

Shen finally figures out that if you want to get tons of praise (and money) on the Internet, you need to draw cute girls doing cute things!

Regardless, even if they were hideous monstrosities like what Potatoman tends to make (the best way to get tons of praise and money from me, quite honestly) I am genuinely fascinated to see where this story will go every week and so glad it wasn't a one-off gag comic, or even ended with just the AI art jokes! Best way to ring in 2023, reading a surprisingly-amazing indie comic!

[Sketch Saturday, returns]

That image at the end cracked me up! Though I've seen straight women who actually look like that, they just tend to gather muscle and fat mostly in their upper body, so I don't know if Trixie is supposed to be a genderswap or simply very top-heavy!

[More Bonnie]

She is WAY out of my league, but man, I love her!

[Adam]

This is the point where Neon Genesis Evangelion just confused me to the point of not paying too much attention to the plot anymore. Still absolutely loved the show on Netflix (including enjoying episodes 25 and 26 for all the wrong reasons)!

DreamsBellArt responds:

I can understand. As silly as it sounds, it takes some rewatches and study of the dialogue to understand the later half of the show, but it's worth it imo

[RFF 1 9 23]

I would be horrified and call the doctor about this, too, but I wouldn't be surprised if the twist is that the doctor says this is just what happens when you have a mild case of the sniffles (not even the cold). Or even that coughing up your entire skeletal system is actually a sign that you're getting better in this world! WHAT ARE THE RULES OF THIS WORLD??

[panty and stocking doing makeup]

I know so little about make-up that I thought Panty was holding a color plate used in filming and compositing at first!

[The Super Spiderman: Day Cast]

I am clearly not a big enough fan of SpiderMan and Marvel in general to get the context of this, but I do like the idea of Gwen Stacy looking and dressing like a modest geek compared to her depiction in SpiderMan: Into the Spider-Verse!